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Advent Prompt One: Glitter

  • Dec. 2nd, 2008 at 12:01 AM
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Thanks to [info]mel39 for organizing this fun fabulous 100 word holiday fest. I wrote this one just for her.

Thanks for reading.




There’s confetti of glitter floating like snow.

Landing everywhere.

On her shoulder.

In her hair.

He’s out of breath from hundreds of steps but that’s not why Ryan can’t breathe, why he can’t capture enough air.

“I love you,” he says and smiles when she tells him, “Thank you.”

He and Marissa were never perfect.

It was always messy.

Overly complicated

Never simple.

Rarely successful.

But there were moments when they shined and New Year's Eve was one of them as the clock counted down the seconds he had left to catch her.

Running up stairs.

A long time ago.


 

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( 18 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]mel39 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 08:00 am (UTC)
*hearts* I loved that scene so much. I'd totally fogotten about the glitter! He’s out of breath from hundreds of steps but that’s not why Ryan can’t breathe, why he can’t capture enough air. This line was perfection!

Edited at 2008-12-02 08:00 am (UTC)
[info]muchtvsocfic wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2008 12:13 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it, Mel.

You know I do hold me a soft spot for these two. (Especially first season.)
[info]fredsmith518 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 08:04 am (UTC)
lovely use of prompt!
[info]muchtvs wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:54 am (UTC)
thanks fred

:o)
[info]fifimom wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 09:50 am (UTC)
Very nice, thanks so much.
[info]muchtvs wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:55 am (UTC)
:o)

*waves*
[info]kazfloyd wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 12:16 pm (UTC)
That was a cute scene. I liked your decription.
[info]muchtvs wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:56 am (UTC)
They did have their moments. One of the scenes that I think is most memorable of all the episodes is the two of them dancing at the wedding.

So sad.
[info]cheekymice wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
Loves!
[info]muchtvs wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:56 am (UTC)
thanks!
[info]smc36 wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
Muchtv!! MuchtV!!!! I love Muchtv!!
[info]muchtvs wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:57 am (UTC)
Oh....you broke out that icon again.

It cracks my shit up.
[info]60schic wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2008 09:08 pm (UTC)
A long time ago.

Ah yes...a time before it all went wrong. When we were all still in love with love. Thank you for reminding us of this, much.

[info]mirella67 wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
I love this, and I agree with it. Once upon a time, I actually liked them together.
[info]helen_c wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
Perfect.

But there were moments when they shined

I love it!
[info]famous99 wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2008 05:49 pm (UTC)
very sweet.
[info]nightrider101 wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
That was such a beautiful scene.

You captured it perfectly!
[info]her_lovelyheart wrote:
Mar. 7th, 2009 03:54 am (UTC)
One of the most epic R/M scenes. Beautiful, beautiful work.
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