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Advent Prompt Eleven: Snowflake

  • Dec. 16th, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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Moving right along...out of order....*shame*.

I'm dedicating this one to my first flist get together in New York City.



Snowflakes melt into Ryan’s outstretched palm.

 

He’s 20 and this is the first time he’s ever seen snow up close and personal.

 

The Nana is sick again.

 

Sick as in no bouncing back this time.  

 

Sick as in a sadness that avalanches for Ryan the awe of being in the largest city in America.

 

Sick as in, “Please. Take me home, Sandy. I want to see my friends, my old friends. My dearest friends.”

 

There’s an overwhelming feeling of inevitable inside, so Ryan searches out Sophie and brings the little girl to the sidewalk and shows her the falling snow.


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( 9 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]katwoman76 wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 07:23 am (UTC)
That's so sad. *sniff*
[info]bicky40 wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 10:37 am (UTC)
:D
[info]kazfloyd wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
Awww.
[info]finlee wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 01:22 pm (UTC)
Very good.

And when will you be in NY! I'm there over the holidays.
[info]jassylou wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
Awww-w ! sad,cute and fluffy,what more could we ask?:D
[info]smc36 wrote:
Dec. 17th, 2008 03:17 pm (UTC)
:>(
[info]famous99 wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2008 03:43 am (UTC)
That really is sad.
[info]60schic wrote:
Dec. 18th, 2008 05:29 am (UTC)
*sniff* for the fic...but *yays* to the NY memories.
[info]fredsmith518 wrote:
Dec. 19th, 2008 09:38 pm (UTC)
well written
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